Friday 30 October 2015

"Little Kite and the Compass Tree" by Brian Maunder - A SYNOPSIS


The plot of this story follows exactly, the story of the picture book “Polly’s Little Kite”. 


I have always wanted to deepen the picture book allegory with the thought that it would be awesome (especially for students who have Central coherence difficulties), to have the story introduced and understood at an early age, and then, later in the learning journey, read and discovered again, seeing it from a different angle to further explore and deepen the initial understanding of its concepts.


I have LOVED writing this story. I hope you enjoy reading it.


Brian Maunder.



Synopsis of “Little Kite and the Compass Tree” by Brian Maunder 2015

Many years ago, a young boy and his father built a tree house together. It was one of the last things the son did with his dad as his father had to go to war. The young boy didn’t really know what war was and hoped his father would be home soon.

Up in the treehouse, whilst waiting for his dad, the boy can see far out into the horizon, and he notices from looking at his compass, that a church spire in the distance is exactly north from his tree. He decides to call it his “Compass Tree”.




Forty years later, the boy is now a father himself. He usually works a job that takes him away from home for long periods of time which makes him miss his family terribly. Recently though, his wife has become very sick and he has taken time off from work to look after her and their daughter Polly. Toby the dog also needs to be looked after. His wife is now in hospital.

As a way of building a relationship with his daughter, the father spends all day with her, helping her to make a kite. Polly sews and paints the fabric. Dad builds the bamboo cross. They put it all together and write prayers onto special bows, which they attach to the kite’s tail.

Polly names it “Little Kite”




They put Little Kite on the table to allow the paint and glue to dry overnight. Polly goes to sleep.

During the night Little Kite gets angry with Dad because he doesn’t like the way he is made. He wiggles and pushes a ball of string off the table. It lands on the floor, trailing its sting over the sharp corner edge of the table.

In the morning Dad and Polly take Little Kite out to fly. Suddenly the string breaks and Little Kite flies away. At first, as he flies over houses and trees, Little Kite enjoys being all by himself on this new adventure. He really didn’t need to be bound to a string after all. But soon the weather changes and he finds himself facing wild seas and a ferocious storm. His fabric starts ripping and tearing apart in the winds.

Meanwhile, as the storm rages outside, Polly and Dad are in their cosy home wondering how Little Kite is going. Dad drifts off to sleep in front of the fire and has a dream about Little Kite and his own father fighting in a war. The dream rekindles a hope that died years ago. After all this time, he is still waiting for his dad to come home. ”Where are you dad?” he whispers.

Many days and nights pass. Little Kite is missing. Polly and Dad have tried everything to find Little Kite but all their efforts fail. They think he may be lost forever.

On their way to see Mum at the hospital, a rare sunny winter’s day inspire Polly and Dad to go through the “Old Ruins”. Dad grew up in this area as a boy, however it was bombed and destroyed during the war. Whilst there, Polly notices something unusual, like a nest at the top of a tree in the distance. As they approach, Dad realises with amazement that Little Kite has landed in his Compass tree.

Dad climbs the Compass Tree just like he did when he was a boy. He is overwhelmed and thrilled to find his old tree house still there, and discovers a miracle . . . a message, hidden inside a bullet within the tree, a remnant of the war, left to him by his father.




They take Little Kite to the hospital and tell Mum all about their wonderful discovery. Mum marvels at Little Kite and the Compass Tree. She looks at the note, and a few mysterious words on it cause her to wonder if there even more to the Fathers message than they first thought?

The strange words lead them on a wonderful journey as they follow clue after clue, each one revealing an aspect of the fathers love and devotion to his son. Eventually, they discover an object, hidden under a tile in the church, a summary of the entire journey.




Amazed by their discovery, they take Little Kite back home and give him a good clean. Dad notices the prayers on the bows have faded away, as if all the prayers have been safely delivered. Only two words remain, which seemingly answer all their prayers.




They mend Little Kite using the cross and blue material from mums sewing bag.  After putting him all together, he looks a bit different but he is like new again. Polly goes to bed.

In the morning, Polly wakes early and checks on Little Kite. She gasps in astonishment. All the blue material they sewed on him yesterday has disappeared, and he looks exactly like the way he was originally made. Was this all a dream?

She goes to ask her dad about it and finds him deep in thought, looking out the window at the church steeple. In his hands are a compass and a bullet shell, and a letter written to him from his father.



 

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Saturday 3 October 2015

Aussie Beautiful. A song by Brian Maunder - how it was written and produced.

“You’re so beautiful.
So beautiful. Bop Bop Beautiful yeah yeah.
And when the morning star becomes the twinkle in your eyes.
And my heart rejoices in the grace that gives us life”

I sang the words, as I strummed the guitar and experimented with different chords and melodies.  It was a strange song to be working on as it didn’t really fit the profile of what I typically write about.

I usually write personal gospel songs so I can sing them when I go busking, but a friend had notified me via Facebook that Cosi was looking for songs, written by South Aussies for his show “South Aussie with Cosi”.



I was in the middle of writing a song about how the most precious and beautiful things in my life are the relationships right in front of me; it was actually about my wife. The song had a “positive” feel to it, so I thought I’d throw in a few Australia type lyrics to see what would happen. The changes seemed to create a great song about my “relationship” with Australia and I loved singing it. With all the negativity in the world, it was great to remember how awesome it is to live here in Australia.



I told my friend via Facebook that I thought I had a good song, but I couldn’t send it to Cosi as it needed to be “professionally produced”.  I knew her hubby was a sound engineer, and we’ve known each other for years (as far back as early Life-FM days), but I didn’t want to bother him.  He already did audio engineering as a job and who wants to work on the weekends?… for free? We are both busy family guys, so I didn’t ask.


Needless to say, my friend said that her hubby would love to produce it for me, and so the process of recording and production began.



I started with the usual song “rough take”, and recorded it as if I were on the street busking (It would later be erased). Damian (the sound producer) then added a solid drum track, and from that I was able to record the other instruments and vocals. I borrowed a bass guitar from church, and also used an ancient keyboard that the church had actually given me ages ago.


It was difficult for me to record, as my wife and I are in the process of building a home so we are renting and living out of boxes. Everything is everywhere. The place where we are renting is also on a main road so it’s virtually impossible to get a nice quiet place to record.

I had to use my small walk-in wardrobe to record, as it’s the only place in the house with a quiet “dead” sound. It’s a tight squeeze to fit all the gear in there, but I managed to record the acoustic guitar and vocals; and even managed to record trumpet in there too (thanks Mike). Where there’s a will there’s a way.


After all the audio was recorded at my house, I sent it to Damo so he could refine it and work his magic. He added other instruments and sound samples as needed and transformed the sound.  After the first mix, we had great positive feedback and people loved the song, but there was some criticism with a few of the initial words; they were too deep and reflective, they needed to be more concrete and obvious.

Receiving critique is not an easy thing (for me anyway). I mean, who has the right to judge my song? But I took a deep breath and tried to listen with an open mind to what my Mum and Auntie and Damo’s wife had to say. I went back to the drawing board to write new lyrics, which meant I then had to re-record and sing the vocals all over again. It was a lot of messing around and hard work but I’m so glad I listened to them. Thanks guys.




“You’re so beautiful.
So beautiful. Aussie Beautiful yeah yeah.
And when the morning sun paints the sky in golden light
The kookaburras laugh and watch the kangaroos take flight


It took ages to produce the song, as both of us were sick at various times, and family life and challenges made it difficult, but we kept going and it is finally finished. My first properly produced song which I still love to sing, even after hearing it a thousand times.




During the recording process, one of the other things I enjoyed creating was the cover design for the song. I tried various designs, starting off with an image of my kids playing on a Hills Hoist. Then I tried Vegemite on toast and even snags/bangas on a barbeque. I eventually settled on the image of burnt toast, shaped into an outline of a map of Australia, on a plate with bark and leaves as a dinner setting, making the word “Oi”. I reckon it turned out pretty cool.


Cosi still hasn’t verified if he will be using it in his show, however I have plans to write written (sheet) music so that school choirs or brass bands can play it if they want to. I’m just grateful that I could write this song, and feel blessed that I am free to sing my songs in the street with joy and without fear.


I hope you like the song too.

Thanks and God bless

Bri.

The song is available in iTunes and CDBaby.